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I am so glad we finally have a definitive rank for DMA on the the mewx tier list

its noticable that you put blood sweat and tears into this the animation is smooth its very weird and some people like that but that drawing style and the people arent very well drawn and if thats your style that is just an excuse

Wonderful, it's a shame that fucks on facebook are going to free-boot this and profit off of it

The jokes were okay at best, but I just couldn't stand the jpeg mouths
aside from that the animation wasn't too good as the characters rarely moved.

The height to width says mobile game on NG but the description mentioned that this is leading up to the release of a first episode.
You mention that you will have 2 other trailers; for these I recommend actually telling us what Battle Brawlers is (maybe tell us about the plot or show us how things work?) and either resize this to fit on one screen or export it threw swivel and it will do allot of that work for you.
Another thing I recommend is not saying "I made this, it took me around 2 hours-" because honestly no one cares how long it took unless it looks STUNNING, however most people will 0 vote this right away for mentioning that you put barely any time into it.
I wish you luck on your series bro!

It's pretty good as far as animatics go, however I advice releasing the actual animations instead

the claymation was probably the best I've seen on Newgrounds but the problem is that it still has that occasional camera jerk that throws everything off, and in certain frames you can see the shadows you cast- to fix this I recommend taking the photos remotely and have strong lights coming at all angles- what really killed this movie though was the lack of sound and music until the end where a song suddenly jumps in.
Sound is what makes things feel real and entertaining and lacking that has turned this animation that could have been great into something bad.

alvwest3712 responds:

yeah i know i was using a tablet without a tripod so it was really hard to keep it still. also if you liked this a have alot more on my channel https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCV8an_-2Lsy297gq-C_FKQQ
also i just dont have the money for audio recording

the animation was pretty okay, but the lyrics were lazy and the use of autotune made it painful to listen to

why the fuck isn't this on the front page
#makeithappenfulp2017

Your shading is great, your audio quality is okay, your animation quality seems like it was animated in 12 frames per second, worst of all the writing seems pretty poor

zumation responds:

Thanks I appreciate it. The writing was indeed the weakest factor to these scene. ill be working on getting a writer.

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