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we have been given you some criticism. Such as:
Actually animate, don't use goAnimate
and
Use real voices

Trust me, once these are done you'll be getting better reviews that what you are currently getting.

AnimationOverload responds:

True, yet remember, the main reason I do what I do is simply for satire. I guess you mother fuckers can't see what I'm trying to prove with my "productions." Nevertheless, I will have actual animation and voice acting soon in my Abortionist, MLP Sex Ed, (and possibly) MLG Sed Ed videos.

In short, I need concrete criticism, i.e. the specifics. Also, I'm looking for some in terms of content as it is the real king. Thank you for clarifying that you Newgrounders hold an oddly pretentious bias.

It's not about homophobia, it's about this being terrible GoAnimate garbage.
If it had real voices I might have given it a star.
If it was funny I may have even given it 3 stars.

AnimationOverload responds:

Do you know the reason for myself using GoAnimate? If not, you may want to reconsider your train-of-thought. Oh well, I suppose I should spoon-feed you satire, then.

It's not bad, but not too good either. I advise having some kind of background sound and background music. I would also recommend taking out the talking bubbles (but the sound effect words seem like a cool choice). Also you should export this as an mp4 using swivel and post it so there arn't any loading issues as there is currently no loading screen for the movie.

Enigmaproductions responds:

You're not the only one who told me to remove the speech bubbles. But I want mine to stand apart because I wanted to do a hybrid between a comic and and anime.

Was this made in After Effects?

UniversalHeat responds:

I made it in anime studio, which uses a similar 2D character rigging system to After Effects.

I love the style, it reminds me of steven universe

ZeTrystan responds:

Thanks! Steven Universe is my favourite show, I'm sure it greatly influenced my style, ahah. :D

Animation is great, however I didn't really understand the 'story' to this.
Also you should probably use a title screen/ load screen or use SWIVEL to convert the swf to an mp4

monsterology responds:

thanks, ill be sure to do that next time!

the only problem I had with this video were the backgrounds, they were clearly pictures thrown through a cartoon filter.

while the animation isn't good I really want to see more of this

Levionix responds:

Trust me this is an older vid I've gotten much better I will post clips from the second episode to prove it

Everyone calm down, this is just a joke about melee elitists.

this is an amazing animation but may I ask how you get these things out so fast? your last animation was 2 weeks ago at most and splatoon JUST came out.

This is the bread box

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