thebreadandbutter's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Spirit Fist Episode 1]

It's not bad, but not too good either. I advise having some kind of background sound and background music. I would also recommend taking out the talking bubbles (but the sound effect words seem like a cool choice). Also you should export this as an mp4 using swivel and post it so there arn't any loading issues as there is currently no loading screen for the movie.

Enigmaproductions responds:

You're not the only one who told me to remove the speech bubbles. But I want mine to stand apart because I wanted to do a hybrid between a comic and and anime.

[HELLEVATOR]

Was this made in After Effects?

UniversalHeat responds:

I made it in anime studio, which uses a similar 2D character rigging system to After Effects.

[Pyromane]

I love the style, it reminds me of steven universe

ZeTrystan responds:

Thanks! Steven Universe is my favourite show, I'm sure it greatly influenced my style, ahah. :D

[the beginning of a great highschool movie :)]

Animation is great, however I didn't really understand the 'story' to this.
Also you should probably use a title screen/ load screen or use SWIVEL to convert the swf to an mp4

monsterology responds:

thanks, ill be sure to do that next time!

[Heatwave Episode 1]

while the animation isn't good I really want to see more of this

Levionix responds:

Trust me this is an older vid I've gotten much better I will post clips from the second episode to prove it

[Donkey Kong's Stop N' Swop]

directed by M Knight Shamalan

JumpNJetz responds:

M Knight Shamalamadingdong**

WHAT A TWIST!!
-Jetz

[FrogMan and Pico]

a "short film"
ARE YOU KIDDING ME THIS THING IS ALMOST AS LONG AS A TOME EPISODE GOOD WORK

artistunknown responds:

:3

It's pretty long for a short film, yeah, but it's not long enough for a feature film.

But yeah, this took forever to make, and I'm really surprised I actually managed to make something this long with semi-consistent quality animation.

Thanks!

[Spotty Pants McGee]

this was really good, glad to see you're improving. Though you should try getting more people to voice act as everyone kinda sounds the same.

miodragvuk9 responds:

im a one man wrecking crew along with my friend who colors the animations =P

[Jet Set Radio is Fun DX]

only problem is that it needs background music other than that it's great

SalehtheAnimator responds:

I would put background music if I knew how to make music.

[Game Grumps Animated]

Ok saying "made in an hour" does not help you score any sympathy stars, put time, love, and pride into every project you do because you'll never know what you will be known for.

miodragvuk9 responds:

thank you but i didnt want "sympathy stars" i was giving basic info on the animation thats all but thank you for giving me your feedback =)