thebreadandbutter's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[the power ep 1]

the claymation was probably the best I've seen on Newgrounds but the problem is that it still has that occasional camera jerk that throws everything off, and in certain frames you can see the shadows you cast- to fix this I recommend taking the photos remotely and have strong lights coming at all angles- what really killed this movie though was the lack of sound and music until the end where a song suddenly jumps in.
Sound is what makes things feel real and entertaining and lacking that has turned this animation that could have been great into something bad.

alvwest3712 responds:

yeah i know i was using a tablet without a tripod so it was really hard to keep it still. also if you liked this a have alot more on my channel https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCV8an_-2Lsy297gq-C_FKQQ
also i just dont have the money for audio recording

[Kidnap]

Your shading is great, your audio quality is okay, your animation quality seems like it was animated in 12 frames per second, worst of all the writing seems pretty poor

zumation responds:

Thanks I appreciate it. The writing was indeed the weakest factor to these scene. ill be working on getting a writer.

[Steven Universe Reanimate Shot 44]

The animation is good, the audio is good, everything is good except how this is a spinet of a full project that you should have held off and posted when it was done

StarLockStudio responds:

We are not in charge when they post the final product. It's a group of artists. We just wanted to share our bit with you guys as we will likely not have the permission to show the finished version on this platform.

[DAMIEN & DEZZ |EPISODE 2| LIPSTICK]

I gave you a zero vote wise because I heard the intro and fucking smashed that shit because usually movies that open with that kind of shit end up being sonic OC fantasies but after the intro it was legitimately good, I'm sorry.

JComX responds:

Hahaha I'm not even mad! Lol that's pretty funny. Don't sweat it. Glad you liked it.

[The Rise of the Red Mask]

I couldn't understand what was happening, all I could fallow is that you traced over some anime stuff or something. Sorry Bruh

AtomikalOfficial responds:

That last part is true. I did have to use some intros as a reference. I was short on time and had to cut out some things since the deadline was 3 days away at the time.
I do appreciate your comment though, Helps me out a bit

[[Persona 4] Animated Comic Dub (part 1)]

This is great! I was planning this myself but it seems that you beat me to it.

Carbonwater responds:

Planning does nothing without any actions.
Wasn't easy, i'll tell you that much!

[Jojo's Aincrad Adventure]

Voice acting was good, you should animate the characters rather than just tweening them around.

Unrighteous responds:

Thank you! Completely agree, next time I'll aim for something shorter, but of much higher quality. For some reason all animation software likes to crash on me, and I just wanted to test the waters first. Now that I have some experience, I'll aim higher :D

[An odd dish]

Looks like something out of monster hunter and I am loving it.

FL-Nordin responds:

I was loving it aswell, so i might try some beast hunting again ;)

[Hackers Today]

we have been given you some criticism. Such as:
Actually animate, don't use goAnimate
and
Use real voices

Trust me, once these are done you'll be getting better reviews that what you are currently getting.

AnimationOverload responds:

True, yet remember, the main reason I do what I do is simply for satire. I guess you mother fuckers can't see what I'm trying to prove with my "productions." Nevertheless, I will have actual animation and voice acting soon in my Abortionist, MLP Sex Ed, (and possibly) MLG Sed Ed videos.

In short, I need concrete criticism, i.e. the specifics. Also, I'm looking for some in terms of content as it is the real king. Thank you for clarifying that you Newgrounders hold an oddly pretentious bias.

[Gay Sex Ed. (Re-upload)]

It's not about homophobia, it's about this being terrible GoAnimate garbage.
If it had real voices I might have given it a star.
If it was funny I may have even given it 3 stars.

AnimationOverload responds:

Do you know the reason for myself using GoAnimate? If not, you may want to reconsider your train-of-thought. Oh well, I suppose I should spoon-feed you satire, then.